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		<title>By: Ken Grindall</title>
		<link>http://mymarketingwriter.com/2009/05/can-you-write-a-better-headline-than-me/comment-page-1/#comment-20</link>
		<dc:creator>Ken Grindall</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 18 May 2009 16:03:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Probably no need to mention the outcome here, since you&#039;d certainly find that at the top of the post... but still, just wanted to add a quick personal congrats to Dave.

I worked really hard to practice a lot of new SEO and search traffic methods here to bring more writers to the challenge. Overall, I hoped for more actual entries but got excellent double and triple digit jumps in visiting readers during the event. There are two directions I plan to take my follow-up...

First, I want to keep learning effective and efficient content management I can use to take the SEO traffic I&#039;m beginning to see and build on it. I will study, practice what I learn and analyze what happens--all right here in the blog for you to share.

Second, I will write a post to explore the headline writing challenge itself. We will review the entries, as well as my several alternate headlines I ended up using on a number of social and professional networks to promote and work the traffic goal. I also want to look once more at the main topic in the challenge post, and talk about how we could have done much, much better at flagging the target audience the article was written for.

Thanks again to everyone.

Oh, and since Dave doesn&#039;t maintain a website any longer for his marketing consult business (he&#039;s swamped with word of mouth clients), I want to extend the promotional bonus feature of the prize to two other great players who made the challenge a fun success...

&lt;strong&gt;Tai Sophia&lt;/strong&gt; surprised me with her great entries. She is all of 20 years old, ya know. I didn&#039;t even start down my personal journey into professional writing until age 29. Now, at age 43, I know the road never ends--and I&#039;m excited to watch Tai&#039;s writing blossom for years to come. You can watch too, by checking out her blog on &quot;life, trust and Christian faith&quot; at:

&lt;a href=&quot;http://beggarlybouquet.com/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Beggarly Bouquet&lt;/a&gt; (high quality content, and a really great design)

Facebook user, I highly recommend you &lt;a href=&quot;http://apps.facebook.com/blognetworks/blog/beggarly_bouquet/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;follow Tai Sophia on the NetworkedBlogs app&lt;/a&gt;. (note: if you don&#039;t already use the app, that link may take you to the main page to get started; you can always come back here to link again, or just look her up.)

&lt;strong&gt;Cathy Harris&lt;/strong&gt; is the &lt;em&gt;Denver Marketing Examiner&lt;/em&gt;. She&#039;s a new professional network acquaintance and friend I&#039;ve made while dividing my time between blogging for practice and hunting for employment. She blogs on the Denver, Colorado marketing scene and was the first person to follow this blog and also the first to get involved, with comments, encouragement and her entry to this challenge!

You can visit Cathy&#039;s DME blog at: &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.examiner.com/x-7523-Denver-Marketing-Examiner&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Denver Marketing Examiner&lt;/a&gt;. Or, if you&#039;re part of the Facebook network, you can &lt;a href=&quot;http://apps.facebook.com/blognetworks/blog/denver_marketing_examiner/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;become a Cathy Harris follower with a great app&lt;/a&gt;.

&lt;strong&gt;Now, stay tuned for the next Copywriting Challenge!&lt;/strong&gt;

Ken</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Probably no need to mention the outcome here, since you&#8217;d certainly find that at the top of the post&#8230; but still, just wanted to add a quick personal congrats to Dave.</p>
<p>I worked really hard to practice a lot of new SEO and search traffic methods here to bring more writers to the challenge. Overall, I hoped for more actual entries but got excellent double and triple digit jumps in visiting readers during the event. There are two directions I plan to take my follow-up&#8230;</p>
<p>First, I want to keep learning effective and efficient content management I can use to take the SEO traffic I&#8217;m beginning to see and build on it. I will study, practice what I learn and analyze what happens&#8211;all right here in the blog for you to share.</p>
<p>Second, I will write a post to explore the headline writing challenge itself. We will review the entries, as well as my several alternate headlines I ended up using on a number of social and professional networks to promote and work the traffic goal. I also want to look once more at the main topic in the challenge post, and talk about how we could have done much, much better at flagging the target audience the article was written for.</p>
<p>Thanks again to everyone.</p>
<p>Oh, and since Dave doesn&#8217;t maintain a website any longer for his marketing consult business (he&#8217;s swamped with word of mouth clients), I want to extend the promotional bonus feature of the prize to two other great players who made the challenge a fun success&#8230;</p>
<p><strong>Tai Sophia</strong> surprised me with her great entries. She is all of 20 years old, ya know. I didn&#8217;t even start down my personal journey into professional writing until age 29. Now, at age 43, I know the road never ends&#8211;and I&#8217;m excited to watch Tai&#8217;s writing blossom for years to come. You can watch too, by checking out her blog on &#8220;life, trust and Christian faith&#8221; at:</p>
<p><a href="http://beggarlybouquet.com/" rel="nofollow">Beggarly Bouquet</a> (high quality content, and a really great design)</p>
<p>Facebook user, I highly recommend you <a href="http://apps.facebook.com/blognetworks/blog/beggarly_bouquet/" rel="nofollow">follow Tai Sophia on the NetworkedBlogs app</a>. (note: if you don&#8217;t already use the app, that link may take you to the main page to get started; you can always come back here to link again, or just look her up.)</p>
<p><strong>Cathy Harris</strong> is the <em>Denver Marketing Examiner</em>. She&#8217;s a new professional network acquaintance and friend I&#8217;ve made while dividing my time between blogging for practice and hunting for employment. She blogs on the Denver, Colorado marketing scene and was the first person to follow this blog and also the first to get involved, with comments, encouragement and her entry to this challenge!</p>
<p>You can visit Cathy&#8217;s DME blog at: <a href="http://www.examiner.com/x-7523-Denver-Marketing-Examiner" rel="nofollow">Denver Marketing Examiner</a>. Or, if you&#8217;re part of the Facebook network, you can <a href="http://apps.facebook.com/blognetworks/blog/denver_marketing_examiner/" rel="nofollow">become a Cathy Harris follower with a great app</a>.</p>
<p><strong>Now, stay tuned for the next Copywriting Challenge!</strong></p>
<p>Ken</p>
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		<title>By: David Polczynski</title>
		<link>http://mymarketingwriter.com/2009/05/can-you-write-a-better-headline-than-me/comment-page-1/#comment-19</link>
		<dc:creator>David Polczynski</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 14 May 2009 21:08:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oooooh... Tai, I like this. You ARE right though... there are a few important things wrong with the headline. Very perceptive. Nice &quot;take.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oooooh&#8230; Tai, I like this. You ARE right though&#8230; there are a few important things wrong with the headline. Very perceptive. Nice &#8220;take.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Tai Sophia</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tai Sophia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 14 May 2009 19:36:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>^ (could also be worded:  &quot;What&#039;s wrong with this headline?  Uncover the secret and WIN!&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>^ (could also be worded:  &#8220;What&#8217;s wrong with this headline?  Uncover the secret and WIN!&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Tai Sophia</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tai Sophia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 14 May 2009 19:35:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>^ (continued from above comment...I pushed enter before I was completely done)

Audience: Anyone who loves a good challenge.
Appeal: Who *doesn&#039;t* want to win a prize, while at the same time having the chance to feel like they succeeded in accomplishing something.
In addition, once they figure out that something isn&#039;t *technically* wrong with it, they may be prompted to read the rest of the post to search for the clues they are missing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>^ (continued from above comment&#8230;I pushed enter before I was completely done)</p>
<p>Audience: Anyone who loves a good challenge.<br />
Appeal: Who *doesn&#8217;t* want to win a prize, while at the same time having the chance to feel like they succeeded in accomplishing something.<br />
In addition, once they figure out that something isn&#8217;t *technically* wrong with it, they may be prompted to read the rest of the post to search for the clues they are missing.</p>
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		<title>By: Tai Sophia</title>
		<link>http://mymarketingwriter.com/2009/05/can-you-write-a-better-headline-than-me/comment-page-1/#comment-16</link>
		<dc:creator>Tai Sophia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 14 May 2009 19:27:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;Something is wrong with this headline...uncover the secret and WIN!&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Something is wrong with this headline&#8230;uncover the secret and WIN!&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Ken Grindall</title>
		<link>http://mymarketingwriter.com/2009/05/can-you-write-a-better-headline-than-me/comment-page-1/#comment-15</link>
		<dc:creator>Ken Grindall</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 09 May 2009 02:53:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>For the record, folks: Dave &quot;Doc&quot; Polczynski is a friend and colleague (see my &quot;I&#039;ve got the goods&quot; page for his big quote). I did not feed him these headlines, he submitted them on his own. He does not need my help, anyway--guy&#039;s a serious copywriter. I&#039;ve watched him work (and worked with him) for over ten years.

Want to win this thing? You&#039;re gonna have to bring some game... bar&#039;s been raised.  KG</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For the record, folks: Dave &#8220;Doc&#8221; Polczynski is a friend and colleague (see my &#8220;I&#8217;ve got the goods&#8221; page for his big quote). I did not feed him these headlines, he submitted them on his own. He does not need my help, anyway&#8211;guy&#8217;s a serious copywriter. I&#8217;ve watched him work (and worked with him) for over ten years.</p>
<p>Want to win this thing? You&#8217;re gonna have to bring some game&#8230; bar&#8217;s been raised.  KG</p>
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		<title>By: David Polczynski</title>
		<link>http://mymarketingwriter.com/2009/05/can-you-write-a-better-headline-than-me/comment-page-1/#comment-14</link>
		<dc:creator>David Polczynski</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 09 May 2009 02:40:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;Unlock the million-dollar headline in your brain!&quot;

Audience: Copywriters, marketers, budding wordsmiths
Almost seems like a &quot;How to&quot; Appeal... like Ken is going to show them &quot;How to&quot; unlock a Million dollar headline... which he is... beyond the contest... with the free guide and Mr. Hopkins review...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Unlock the million-dollar headline in your brain!&#8221;</p>
<p>Audience: Copywriters, marketers, budding wordsmiths<br />
Almost seems like a &#8220;How to&#8221; Appeal&#8230; like Ken is going to show them &#8220;How to&#8221; unlock a Million dollar headline&#8230; which he is&#8230; beyond the contest&#8230; with the free guide and Mr. Hopkins review&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: David Polczynski</title>
		<link>http://mymarketingwriter.com/2009/05/can-you-write-a-better-headline-than-me/comment-page-1/#comment-13</link>
		<dc:creator>David Polczynski</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 09 May 2009 02:34:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;I’ll scream “UNCLE” if you beat my headline!&quot;

Audience: Copywriters, marketers, budding wordsmiths
Appeal: Fame, honor and a challenge to beat Ken

Please I&#039;d like to see Ken scream!!! Hee, hee.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;I’ll scream “UNCLE” if you beat my headline!&#8221;</p>
<p>Audience: Copywriters, marketers, budding wordsmiths<br />
Appeal: Fame, honor and a challenge to beat Ken</p>
<p>Please I&#8217;d like to see Ken scream!!! Hee, hee.</p>
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		<title>By: David Polczynski</title>
		<link>http://mymarketingwriter.com/2009/05/can-you-write-a-better-headline-than-me/comment-page-1/#comment-12</link>
		<dc:creator>David Polczynski</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 09 May 2009 02:32:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;Fame, honor and a $10 gift card if you beat my headline!&quot;

Audience: Copywriters, marketers, budding wordsmiths
Appeal: Fame, honor and money... plus a challenge to be Ken</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Fame, honor and a $10 gift card if you beat my headline!&#8221;</p>
<p>Audience: Copywriters, marketers, budding wordsmiths<br />
Appeal: Fame, honor and money&#8230; plus a challenge to be Ken</p>
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